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device0815 example lacks introduction #1

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chrysn opened this issue May 30, 2022 · 0 comments

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chrysn commented May 30, 2022

(From Marco's review)

[Section 3]

Perhaps introduce the device name device0815.example.com before the
example begins?

In the last paragraph, at least some of the text starting from "A
simplistic client ..." seems to actually refer to the example shown in
Figure 3 of Section 4.

(Originally https://gitlab.com/chrysn/transport-indication/-/issues/1)

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